Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Frank Jr. - A Patti Nase Abbott, Flash Fiction Bit


Frank Jr.
by
Don Lafferty


            “Looks natural, right?” Frank Jr. primped and tousled and teased out the front of his new hair piece while Lumpy held the notebook-sized mirror as still as he could. Frank Jr. looked at his left profile, then his right. He looked slightly down and then up. Frank Jr. loved Frank Jr.
            “Whadda ya think?” he asked again. Nobody said shit. It looked like a fucking toupee.
            He looked around the mirror at Lumpy.
            “Am I fuckin’ talkin’ to myself here?”
            “It looks good, Mister G. It looks real good,” Lumpy answered. Nobody else spoke up and Lumpy’s hands shook.
            “Hold that thing still, ya fuckin’ jackoff,” Frankie Jr. turned to the left again, then back to the right.
            “Yeah,” he said,” I think it looks pretty good too. He turned around to face Louie and me and pointed at himself with two thumbs. “Bitches are gonna be falling all over me now. You watch.”
            Louie dealt a new hand, we kept our mouths shut. Sometimes when you say nothing, it says everything.
            “Fuck the both of you, assholes,” said Frank Jr., “in fact, get the fuck outta here. Don’t you fuckers have shit to do anyway?”
            “The old man told us to meet him here,” Louie said without looking up from his hand. He flipped a card on the table and took one from the pile.
            “He didn’t tell me nothin’ about coming here,” Frank Jr. said.
            This was the first I'd heard of it too.
            Lumpy stood quietly behind Frank Jr. still holding the mirror and I could see toupee shift along the line where the piece ended and his real hair hung on for dear life.
            “Don’t know what to tell you, Junior,” said Louie.
            “Don’t you fuckin’ call me that,” Frank Jr. seethed, scattering the cards with a swipe of his hand, but Louie didn't get excited, just placed his cards neatly on the table and folded his arms across his chest, looking up at the smudged Purolator clock on the wall for a moment before closing his eyes.
            “I’m gonna catch a little nap,” he said.
            Frank Jr. pushed some numbers on his cell phone and walked out the front door.
            “Put the mirror down, Lumpy,” I said.
            “But what if-,”
            “Put it down. It’s okay.”
            “Go down Dunkin Donuts and grab us some coffees.” Louie shoved a twenty at him and Lumpy slipped out the back door of the garage to avoid Frank Jr.
            “Go ahead,” Louie said to me, his eyes still closed. “What’s on your mind?”
            “What if he talks to the old man?” I asked.
            “He won’t.”
            “How do you know?”
            “I just know.”
            “But-,”
            “Ginny took the old man to A.C.,” Louie said. He slipped a cell phone out of his jacket pocket and showed me a picture of Frank Senior splayed naked and bloody in an empty spa tub. The gaping wound across his throat was visible even on the little screen, and my heart pounded so loud in my ears that I didn’t hear Baseball Mike come into the room until he clapped me on the back.
            “Where is he?” Mike asked.
            “Out front,” Louie said.
            “Where’s Lumpy,” Mike asked.
            “Sent him for coffee,” replied Louie.
            Mike peeked out the dirty front window and slid a black iron pipe out of his sleeve.
            “Nothing happens to the kid,” said Louie.
            “Yo, guys, hang on a second,” I said. “What the fuck is going on?”
            “Time for a change,” Louie answered.
            I turned to Mike. “The Harts are good with this?” Mike said nothing but slid over behind Louie, out of sight of the front door.
            “The Harts don’t know yet,” said Louie.
            “Shit man, you’re gonna get us killed with this,” I said, peeking out the window at Frank Jr. on the phone.
            “Don’t be a little bitch. I got this,” said Louie.
            The clank of the iron pipe and the wet crunch of Louie’s skull caving in didn’t register right away. I turned to see Baseball Mike lay Louie’s head down on the card table and bring the pipe down hard against the base of his skull.
            “It’s okay, Ronnie, you ain’t a part of this,” he said.
            He walked over to the front door and waved Frank Jr. in.
            “That worthless piece of shit thought he could just grab what’s mine,” Frank Jr. said, spitting on Louie’s cooling corpse and kicking him to the floor. “And you,” he looked at me. “You were going right along with it weren’t you, ya fuck?”
            “Mister G, I swear, I didn’t know a goddamn thing about-,” I started, when in a flash, Mike brought the pipe down on the back of Frank Jr.’s head and he collapsed like a puppet with its strings all cut. He lay gurgling on the greasy cement floor of the office with his new hair piece all flapped over. Baseball Mike clipped him once more at the base of the skull for good measure just as Lumpy walked in with the carrier full of coffees.
            “I picked up a dozen a doughnuts,” his words trailed off to a squeak.
            Mike bent to check Frank Jr. for a pulse and looked up at Lumpy.
            “Don’t you spill them coffees,” he said. You got enough cleaning up to do."

#END#

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8 comments:

  1. Flawless dialog in a tight story, Thanks, Don!

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  2. Yeah, that dialogue is amazing. Nice.

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  3. Thanks, Patti and Fleur, for taking the time to read, and for the kind words.

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  4. Great tough stuff. And I was glad to see Lumpy made it out of the story alive.

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  5. You know...nothing good can come from buying a bad toupee. Excellent story.

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  6. Letting the story out through tight dialog and a bonus twist at the end. Nicely done.

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  7. A good, tough story. (And doughnuts can be pretty good after a messy cleanup.)

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  8. So frigging nice of you all. Many, many thanks.

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